Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Setting description: The Coral Reef




The Coral Reef (setting description)                 Senses: Hear,Smell,See,Taste and Touch/Texture



Tanisha


Paragraph  1- Atmosphere and weather
Paragraph  2- The Island 
Paragraph  3- The Dock and The Water
Paragraph  4- Sum it all up
WALT: use language features


Paragraph 1:
It was a bright, blazing, luminous day. The atmosphere was relaxing, calm and peaceful. The scenery was beautiful and memorising. It looked liked a tropical paradise


Paragraph 2:
In the background, was an island cloaked with trees, bushes and other greenery. The green plants looked rough but not spiky.  In between the bushes and trees was a slightly small opening that looked like there was more to see. The trees and bushes surrounding the island looked like they were soldiers keeping gaurd.You could barely see people heading into the opening, they were probably wondering what new and fascinating things they would discover up ahead.  Close to the water, on the shore, was what looked like some picnic tables with blue and light brown umbrellas for shade from the sweltering sun. Close to the water’s edge were more of these umbrellas. They were also in a bad condition and were ripped in some places.You could also view some of the inside of the bushy forest. It was also covered in the lush green trees, plants and bushes. In the water were what looked like algae in rock like shapes and mushy plants. A mix of white and peach sand covered the rest of the beachfront.  The sand and crystal clear ocean made the place look like a luxurious and tranquil destination to have a relaxing holiday in.


Paragraph 3;
The water in the foreground, surrounding the island was a mix of different shades of blue and a little bit of green. A part of the water was overshadowed by the greenery which was making some of the water look murky green. The colour of the water changed into a dark blue as it got towards the other part of the island. Far in the distance was what looked like a cruise ship. The cruise ship looked like a miniscule ant that could rarely be seen by a naked eye. Coming towards the end of the picture was half of a dock. The dock was wooden and was in good shape. It was a light brown colour. At the end of the dock, near the water, was a bench that  you would think was for sitting on whilst fishing. In the water was a darker brown coloured piece of 
Wood.


Paragraph 4:

Overall, the scenery and atmosphere was peaceful, calm and relaxing. Probably everyone wants to go there and have a luxurious trip of a lifetime. If anyone wanted to come they would want to stay there for the rest of their lives.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome job! Tanisha! I really liked how you added a lot of sophisticated vocab and you met your goal. Next time just think about adding too much info and not too much

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