Why year 4's Should go to camp

                          Why Year 4's should go to camp

Dear Ms Rithchie,

I am very disappointed after watching the camp video that our class has decided that we can persuade you to let us year 4's go go to camp. 

I think we deserve to go to camp because it's not fair for us year 4's because that we have to work hard on our studies while the year 6's get to have fun and enjoy camp. It is not fair that the year 6 students get to go kayaking, archery, rock climbing, watching movies, boggy boarding and swimming at the beach. While others may  disagree  I agree that year 4's deserve the chance to go to camp because when we come back we will be more mature and will be able to teach the juniors what we did. As you will agree we should go to camp because when we go to camp we will learn friendship, thinking for yourself and being on our own. Another reason year 4's  should go to camp because when we go to camp we will get rid of our fears and will get us out of our comfort zone.

In conclusion, I hope this is enough information for you to let us year 4's to go to camp.